Thursday, November 30, 2017

Reading Notes: The Indian Story Book Part B

Title: The Indian Story Book Part B
Author: Richard Wilson
Illustrator: Frank Pape
Year: 1914

- The king is goes out to hunt antelope. As he is about to shoot one with an arrow, two hermits step into the way. I could tell a story where the hermits step out too late and one is killed or wounded by the arrow, leading to a curse on the king.

- The king and Sakuntala get married in the forest while her foster-father is away. When he comes back, he gets her ready to go live with him in his palace. I could retell the story where he is not please that the king marries his daughter while he is not there or without asking his permission, leading to a curse on the king.

- A fawn who Sakuntala had taken care of since the death of its mother tried to prevent her from leaving, making Sakuntala rethink her decision. I could tell a story where she takes the fawn with her and perhaps one of the forest fairies. I could also tell a story where she tries to bring all the creatures of the forest that she had cared for to the palace of the king, eventually ending in him realizing that she belongs to the forest and that they can't be together...or that he would have to give up everything that he has to move to the forest and live like a hermit in order for it to work between them.

- Sakuntala goes to the palace and presents herself to the king who has no recollection of the marriage. I could tell a story where prior to this event, something happens to him that causes him to lose his memory, such a falling and hitting his head, or later being diagnosed with amnesia or another disease that affects memory.

- A fisherman finds the ring that the king gave to Sakuntala in the belly of the fish and goes to the city to sell it when he is captured by officers of the kingdom. I could tell the story of the man coming upon the ring and perhaps an adventure he had with the ring in his possession.

- The charioteer of Indra is sent to the king and asks for his help destroying giants that have been causing issues. The king does this at once, and on the way back, they stop to pay homage to a holy site. Here they come upon maidens and a young boy who the king feels much affection for, who happens to be his son. He also finds Sakuntala there. I could tell this part of the story much more in depth than what it was told. 

Dushyanta and Sakuntala
Image Author: vintage prints
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons

Wednesday, November 29, 2017

Reading Notes: The Indian Story Book Part A

Title: The Indian Story Book Part A
Author: Richard Wilson
Illustrator: Frank Pape
Year: 1914

- King Visvamitra is bored and wants to go to war, but due to his power, everyone wants to be his friend. I could tell a story where the king decides to go to war with some of his allies, resulting in everyone losing respect for him. I could also tell a story where he and his army travels a great distance, taking a lot of attrition, and ultimately losing the battle. Or, I could tell a story where Visvamitra, still bored and longing for battle, instead creates a sport to play against his allies to satisfy his boredom.

- The King lives like a hermit in order to win the favor of the gods. He asks for all the divine weapons in order to defeat the hermit. I could tell a story where he realizes that he could just ask the gods to give him the cow or a cow with the same power. I could also tell a story where, due to his time as a hermit, he finds happiness the way that the other hermit has and no longer seeks war.

- The king threw a dart at the hermit which the hermit swallowed. His eyes turned red and he glowed, but did nothing. I could tell a story where this dart has an effect on him like that of the Hulk or something similar.

- At the end of the story, the King devotes his life toward becoming more powerful in order to get revenge on the hermit, only to ask the gods for the power to see good in everyone. In the end, he no longer wanted revenge or the cow.

- When the King asked which holy man would travel to the forest to find the angry sage and his son, they all replied that it was a noble mission...for someone else. They all tried to get each other to do the mission. I found that part to be very humorous. 

- Even the animals are afraid of the angry hermits son because the angry hermit had cursed them simply for crossing his path. The son is completely alone.

-  At the end of the story, the hermit finds that his son has married a princess and become very wealthy. I could tell a story where this causes his anger to fade and changes his entire outlook on people.

Tempting Rishyasringa 
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons

Thursday, November 16, 2017

Week 13 Story: Ayodhya's Disease

Yet another dark and gloomy day in this wretched city. Will the sun ever shine again? I can't believe this used to be such a great city. A terrible disease is running rampant in our city. Grief. The streets have become filled with trash. People are no longer happy to see others, much less friendly to one another. No one even seems to care anymore.

It has only been seven years since Rama was exiled. Who knows if he will ever come back. Who knows if he is even still alive. Before this, things were great. Ayodhya was the center of the country and it was poised to be the center of the world when Rama was set to take over. But that vile queen took all that away from us. I truly hate that woman. I think everyone does. Even her own son hates her for what she did! 

Bharata isn't a bad guy. He's a great guy in fact. He does his best, but he certainly isn't Rama. This would have never happened had Rama been given the throne that he deserved. That evil woman. Naturally, she hasn't shown her face in public in years. Not that that she anything good wold happen if she did anyway. Hopefully we never have to see her again.

If I had the money, I would just move to Mithila City. It was very beautiful when we went for the wedding. It wasn't as great as our city was, but it was very nice. I still remember the wedding like it was yesterday. Such a joyous occasion. I miss that feeling. We should have moved when Rama was first sent away. Now we barely even have money for food, much less enough to move so far away. We should have seen this coming. Everything else went to hell without Rama, why wouldn't the economy? 

It was bad enough that he had to leave, but Lakshmana and Sita too?! And King Dasharatha?! They could have at least held this place together until Rama came home. Home....this place isn't home anymore. It's more of a prison. Even if Rama ever did come back, he probably wouldn't recognize this place. And if he did, why would he want to live here? No one wants to live here now. Thanks to that despicable queen.

Trolls - Clint Eastwood video at Youtube



Author's Note: In the original story, it is said that Ayodhya had become stricken with grief. My story is the thoughts of a citizen reflecting on what was and what now is, and who is believed to be responsible.
Bibliography. The Indian Story Book: Rama's Quest by Richard Wilson. Illustrated by Frank Pape. Web Source.

Wednesday, November 15, 2017

Reading Notes: Rama's Quest Part B

TitleThe Indian Story Book: Rama's Quest Part B
Author: Richard Wilson
Illustrator: Frank Pape
Year: 1914

- Sita's overseers have compassion for Sita after Ravana tells her that Rama is dead and tell her the truth in order to comfort her. I could tell a story more in depth about this exchange. I could also tell a story that takes place long after the battle about Sita having her favorite overseer as a good friend and Maiden.

- In the story, night falls during the battle for Lanka, but the stars refuse to shine on a scene so terrible and strange...I could tell a story of a conversation between a few stars and the moon about the events that are taking place.

- Ravana's brother is described as a "jolly giant." I could tell a story about him being woken to fight Rama's army, but instead making friends with everyone.

- Ravana hits Lakshmana with a spear, prompting Hanuman to go to the Himalayas to get a magic, medical plant. I could tell a story about Hanuman's journey.

- Rama's charioteer tells Rama to aim for Ravana's heart as "it is the heart, not the head, that is the seat of evil." I find this to be a very interesting quote.


Sita Tested by Fire
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Tuesday, November 14, 2017

Reading Notes: Rama's Quest Part A

Title: The Indian Story Book: Rama's Quest Part A
Author: Richard Wilson
Illustrator: Frank Pape
Year: 1914

- Rama and Lakshmana are merely humans in this epic, not gods reincarnated. They face a shape-shifting ogress in their first battle, and manage to succeed. I could give a detailed account of this battle.

- It is said that the brothers were successful in battle because they exercised constantly, among other things. I could tell a story about one of their exercise sessions.

- I think it is interesting that Rama's companion is referred to as a "magician." The first thing I think of is him just being there for entertainment. I could tell a story about Rama and Lakshmana defeating a bunch of evil beings, while the magician just does simple card tricks, or pulls rabbits out of a hat. Something completely absurd, that makes Rama happy, but also shows his childishness/innocence. 

- At the beginning of the epic, Ayodhya is described as almost a perfect city with nothing wrong. One Rama is sent into exile, the city is filled with grief. I could tell a story painting the picture of how much the city had fallen due to Rama's exile. I could tell it from the point of view of a peasant, either talking to another peasant, or maybe his/her observations on their journey to the marketplace or something similar.

- After Ravana carries off Sita, Rama is angry with Lakshmana. Lakshmana remind Rama that when Sita called him a coward, he had to protect his dignity, which somehow made Rama feel better. When Sugriva gave Rama the golden circlet, he found it difficult to preserve his dignity. I feel that I could tell a story where this much pride and dignity is harmful, and not helpful, although you think they would have realized that when it led to Sita being captured. Maybe I could tell a story of the conversation between Rama and Lakshmana where they both come to the realization that so much pride can be hurtful.

- Rama saying "That's child's play" makes me laugh.

Building the Bridge to Lanka
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Thursday, November 9, 2017

Week 12 Story: Bedlam

Duryodhana took another drink from his mug. "I don't care what happened last season, we are going to win this year!" Duryodhana was once again arguing with his cousin, Arjuna, before the big game. This was a yearly occurrence that dated back to 1904.

"Duryodhana," Arjuna started, "what on earth makes you think you will win this season? Have you learned nothing over the last decade....better yet, have you learned nothing over the last century?!"

Arjuna did have a point. Duryodhana's Cowboys had only won two out of the last ten meetings between the two teams and boasted only eighteen total wins in the history of the series. Arjuna's Sooners had won eighty-six. There were also seven ties.

"I'll tell you why we will win; our quarterback, Karna, is going to lead us to victory. He's just as good as your quarterback, probably better. Drona, our running back, is going to run all over your defense behind our amazing offensive line. We have the best receivers in football and there's no way the Sooners will be able to slow them down. This is our year!"

While Duryodhana's Cowboys did have a good quarterback, and good running back, and arguably the best receivers in football, and Arjuna's Sooners had been mediocre at best defensively, the Sooners' offense was the best in the nation.

"I don't disagree that your Cowboys will score a lot of points, Duryodhana, it's just that the Sooners will score more." Arjuna calmly replied.

"That's absurd! There's no way Coach Bheeshma will allow that to happen. Your team will be lucky to even cross the goal line. I wouldn't be surprised if Krishna forfeits at the half."

Although Coach Krishna hadn't been with the Sooners long, he was one of the most respected and best coaches in football. He was a household name and was well respected by all of his peers.

"I think you may have had a bit too much to drink, Duryodhana. It is pointless to argue with you. Every year you tell me how great your team is and how badly your team is going to win, and every year your team is humiliated. This year will be no different. I guess we will just have to wait until Saturday."

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Image Creator: Jeremy Harris




Bibliography.The Bhagavad Gita translated by Ramanand Prasad.
In the original story, Sanjaya is relaying to King Dhritarashtra what he overheard Duryodhana telling Drona before the battle. Duryodhana tells Drona that there are many warriors on his side that are equal to Arjuna and that Bheeshma (I spelled the names that same as in the original story), his army commander, was invincible. He believes that the Pandavas' army would be easily defeated. In my story, I replaced the war with a yearly football game where one team always talks their side up, assuming they will win before coming back to reality after the game.

Wednesday, November 8, 2017

Reading Notes: The Bhagavad Gita Part B

Title: The Bhagavad Gita Part B
Translator: Ramanand Prasad
Year: 1988

- Krishna is telling Arjuna that he is the reincarnation of Vishnu, stating that he is the origin of all. I feel like this would be similar to one of the disciples talking with Jesus, although in this case, Krishna is trying to convince Arjuna to go to war with his family. I feel like this story could be retold where it is some other religious figure, perhaps Jesus, speaking to someone about who they are. 

- Krishna tells Arjuna to fight and enjoy the kingdom he is about to inherit as all the warriors on the other side have already been destroyed by Krishna. Arjuna is merely an instrument. 

- Krishna tells Arjuna that he is the only one to see him in his four-armed form. I could write a story about Arjuna, years later, explaining to his grandchildren what it was that he saw and how he was able to see it.

- Krishna refers to his body as "the mini universe."

- I believe that in the version of the Mahabharata that I read, this conversation between Arjuna and Krishna was taking place during the middle of the war. I could retell this story with these two talking on the middle of the battle field as warriors fight all around them, but in slow motion, and even coming to a standstill when Krishna changes form.

- Krishna names off hypocrisy, arrogance, pride, anger, harshness, and ignorance as someone born with demonic qualities. These qualities describe Duryodhana completely. I could retell this story where instead of Krishna telling Arjuna how great he (Arjuna) is, he could be talking to Duryodhana, telling him how awful he is with Duryodhana vowing to change his ways in the end.

- The entire conversation between Krishna and Arjuna is being told by Sanjaya to King Dhritarashtra. I could retell this story where it's being told to all of the Kauravas, changing their minds about wanting to go to war with the Pandavas.

Four-Armed Krishna
Image Author: Ramanarayanadatta astri
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons

Tuesday, November 7, 2017

Reading Notes: The Bhagavad Gita Part A

Title: The Bhagavad Gita Part A
Translator: Ramanand Prasad
Year: 1988

- Arjuna's Decision - This story starts with Sanjaya telling King Dhritarashtra how all of his warrior stacks up against the Pandava's warriors. They are basically game planning for the upcoming battle. It reminds me of game planning for a football game, trying to decide each team's strengths and weaknesses and where to attack a defense or offense. If I were to retell this story, I could retell it a couple different ways. I could tell it as an announcer setting the stage for the big game between two rival football teams, the Pandavas and the Kauravas. 
I could also tell this story from the perspective of fans of the two opposing teams, arguing about why their team is going to win the big game. The setting would probably be in a bar on a Friday night before the game on Saturday.

- Arjuna tells Krishna that he does not want to fight against his cousins and the people that have raised him and Krishna talks him into it, telling him why he should. I think this story would be interesting if the Pandavas decided not to fight the Kauravas and go back to living in the forest. Durodhana would celebrate at first, but no one else would and no one would talk to him anymore afterwards. He would become lonely and seek out the Pandavas where he would find acceptance and friendship.

- I find it interesting that Krishna tells Arjuna that if you nourish the Devas by Yajna and learn to give up all personal desires, the Devas will fulfill all of your desires.

- I do like that Krishna says that even though there is nothing in the world (he says worlds) that he should do or obtain, he still does work because if he doesn't do work, people will follow his lead and the would would perish. He also talks about not having attachment to the results of the work that you do and trusting that everything happens the way that it should. I feel that if people lived this way, they would be a lot less stressed, and possibly happier. But it is a very hard to control your mind in that way.

Krishna and Arjuna
Image Author: Arnab Dutta
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons

Thursday, November 2, 2017

Week 11 Story: The Golden Bowl

A poor, old woman and her granddaughter decided it was time to start their spring cleaning. They dusted shelves and swept floor throughout the house, removing cobwebs that were created during the cold winter months. As they went from room to room, they would occasionally find items that had been missing for months, some that they forgot even existed. While cleaning the kitchen, the little girl stumbled upon a bowl that was covered in dust and clearly had not been used in a very long time.

At the start of Spring, merchants resumed their practice of traveling from village to village, selling and bartering in order to find the best deal for both parties. This was how most merchants worked, anyway. There were always a few who sought to maximize their profits by taking advantage of those who did not know the true value of their possessions. 

One of these deceitful merchants made their way down the old lady's street. The little girl saw him coming up the road and noticed that he had quite a few goods with him. After the harsh winter they had just experienced, the little girl hoped to trade the bowl for a blanket or two in preparation for the next winter. Her grandmother was getting quite old, after all. 

When the merchant got near, the old woman and the little girl approached him with the bowl. They handed it to him, and asked if it was worth two of his blankets. After examining the bowl for an extended period of time, the merchant realized that it was made entirely of gold and was worth more than all of his possessions combined. He scoffed at the two as his greed set in, "Two blankets! For this old thing?! I wouldn't even give you a washcloth." With that, he tossed to bowl aside and continued on to the next street. His plan was to come back later and trade one blanket for the bowl, knowing that the family had no idea how much it was worth. 

As the greedy merchant left, another merchant, this one very kind and helpful made his way down the little girl's road. The girl's grandmother had resumed cleaning, but the little girl sat outside crying. When the merchant saw her, he approached her and asked what was wrong. The girl explained that she had asked the other merchant for two blankets in exchange for the bowl, but he told her that it was worthless. They had nothing else in the house to trade and she was worried about how her grandmother would fare during the next winter without blankets.

The kind merchant told the little girl to give him the bowl. Without looking at it, he gave her two of his best blankets. The girl smiled, hugged the merchant, and went to show her grandmother what she received. While the little girl was inside, he took a look at the bowl as it seemed awfully heavy. Once he realized that it was made of gold, he knew he had a decision to make. He could take it to the nearest bank, cash it in, and retire, or he could tell the family the true value of their bowl. It took him less than a second to make his decision. Within minutes, the merchant was taking the family to the bank. 

The second merchant, who had spent the entire day thinking about what he was going to do with all the money he was about to make, finally made his way back to old lady's house. He knocked on the door, prepared to offer them one old and torn blanket for their bowl, but no one was home. He cried himself to sleep that night, realizing that his extreme greed had cost him a once in a lifetime opportunity.

Golden Bowl
Image Author: 颐园新居
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons


Authors Note: In the original story, the first merchant says the bowl isn't worth 7 pennies, throws it on the ground, and leaves. The second merchant, also realizing it's value, gives the family everything he owns, plus all the money he has, equaling $1,000. He then catches a boat and is able to trade the bowl for $100,000, while the first merchant chases him. In my story, the second merchant takes the family to get the full value of the bowl instead of leaving them with 1% of it's value and the first merchant is clueless as to what happened. 
Bibliography. Grandmother's Golden Dish by Marie L. Shedlock in Eastern Stories and Legends. Web Source.

Reading Notes: Eastern Stories and Legends Part D

Title: Eastern Stories and Legends Part D
Author: Marie Shedlock
Year: 1920 (originally published in 1910)


- In The Crow That Though it Knew, the land was struck by famine and the people could offer food to crows, snakes, or goblins. I could write a story about the crows eating the snakes and helping the people fight off the goblins who are now angry that they aren't getting tribute. I could also incorporate buzzards who would eat anything left over.

- The younger brother tried to cheat his older brother out of money, but accidentally threw all the money over board. When the money was returned to the older brother, even after knowing what his younger brother did, he still gave him half. I could continue this story starting from when the younger brother receives his half. When he gets the money, he could see the kindness of his older brother and the wrong in his actions. He could throw his money back into the Ganges as a way of repentance, or he could find a way to secretly give the money back to his brother. 

- Buddha asked only that where he dealt would be free of disease, that only he would be free of greed, malice, and hatred. If I were to retell this story, I would have him ask for other things that would help everyone and not just himself.

- The king chose a poor peasant to be his valuer. In retelling this story, I would have the peasant look to the Bodisat for guidance and to find a happier ending for the peasant. After the peasant values the kingdom for a grain of rice, the Bodisat would get the kingdom, making him king. He would then train the peasant to become and actual valuer, giving him a career.

- The villagers in The Poisonous Trees trick people into eating poisonous fruits in order to kill and rob them. I would retell this story where the poisonous tree is chopped down and the villagers left with no way to fool travelers.

- The king makes the white elephant his state elephant, but gets jealous because everyone admires his beauty....does not makes sense. He has the elephant climb a mountain to prove how well trained it is, while he stands at the foot of the mountain. I would retell this story where the elephant starts to climb the mountain, but falls after only a few feet, crushing the king, but not hurting the elephant.

White Elephant
Image Author: Colesworthy Grant
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons

Reading Notes: Eastern Stories and Legends Part C

Title: Eastern Stories and Legends Part C
Author: Marie Shedlock
Year: 1920 (originally published in 1910)


- The two hawks, osprey, lion, and turtle build a friendship that lasts generations. For this story, I could tell a second part that features the children of each animal, and perhaps the children of the men. I could also tell a story of the hawk talking to the people and befriending them just as he did the rest of the animals.

- After not realizing the pot was gold, the woman tried to give it away for nothing. Even after learning that it was worth 100,000, she gave it away for 1,000. It is not surprise that this once wealthy family has been reduced to extreme poverty. This story could be retold where the second merchant tells her what it is worth and instead of giving her 1% for it, he takes her to the boat himself and gets her the entirety of its worth.

- I did not like the ending to the story The Elephant that Spared Life. In the end, the King, who refused to listen to the 30 men and sentenced them to death, gave them all of the slanderer's possessions and made him their slave. While they were waiting to get trampled, the Bodisat reminded the 30 men to keep the Five Commandments, loving those who were doing them wrong as they loved themselves. I could retell this story where at the end, the 30 men reject the slanderer's possessions and him being their slave, but instead ask that he come live and work with them for a year to see the way that they live. 


- The story How the Antelope Was Caught shows the dangers of greed, using the antelope getting caught as a way to show that your greed can get you into trouble. It also shows, but does not mention, the power of kindness and how it can help those who put themselves in a bad position. I also don't know that it was entirely greed on the part of the antelope as it seemed that he came to trust the gardener, which could be another story on its own.

- In the story of the Banyan Deer, the golden deer is king. I cannot help but think of Rama trying to capture a golden deer for Sita. I could write a story where Rama kills the golden deer just as he did, but instead of being Marichi, this deer would be the Bodisat. When Rama kills him, he is then cursed and cannot rescue Sita from Ravana until he has fulfilled an oath of some sort.

- In the Pupil Who Taught His Teacher, the pupil really didn't teach anything. I don't like that the message is if you do the right thing, you won't die. Unfortunately, bad things happen all the time, and they happen to good and bad people alike. People shouldn't do good things to continue living, they should do good things because it's the right thing to do. If I were to retell this story, I would tell it in a way that incorporates that message, not the one that was told.

- In The Man Who Told a Lie, the man realizes that he does not possess the qualities needed to have a wreath. Instead of lying about having the traits, he could, now that he realizes he doesn't have them, change his life to start living in a way that would get him a wreath.

Golden Deer
Image Source: Wikipedia

Thursday, October 26, 2017

Reading Notes: Jataka Tales Part A

Title: Jataka Tales Part A
Author: Ellen C. Babbitt
Illustrator: Ellsworth Young
Year: 1912

- The crocodile talks too much. If he hadn't told the monkey that he was going to kill him for his heart, he wouldn't have gotten duped.

- The way the story is told, it seems that the crocodile is always watching the monkey, while the monkey is never told to be watching the crocodile; however, the monkey clearly has much better knowledge of the crocodile than the crocodile does of the monkey. 

- A talking turtle would probably scare me too. I don't know that I would try to kill it, though.

- The little girl's greed (along with the kindness of the second merchant) actually led to her family getting many things instead of just one or nothing, while the first merchant's greed kept him from having something worth a lot of money for very little. If he was going to give up something for it anyway, he should have just done so in the first place, but then there wouldn't be much of a story.

- The flying turtle's bad attitude led to his death. Perhaps the geese could have given him more of a warning that he would die if he talked during their trip instead of just telling him not to. It would also be interesting to think about the turtle's thoughts as he fell from the sky.

- I think the story of the ox would be kind of funny (and a bit sad) if the ox went back to pull the carts the second time after having the talk with his owner just to find out that he wasn't actually strong enough to pull 100 carts. Maybe the owner could have sold him for all the money he lost.

- Never give up water, especially when you do not have another source. The men weren't even carrying it, it was being pulled by the oxen. No reason to throw it away.

- The fowler's wife was made that he wasn't bringing home any quail. If she would have worked with him the way the quails were working together, they would have caught more. 

- The king could have chosen anyone to be his valuer, but he chose an uneducated peasant. He really just needed to choose someone who thought in a similar manner as him, not someone of less intelligence. 

- The timid rabbit reminds me of the saying "If everyone else jumped off a bridge, would you?" Under many circumstances I would assume that if everyone is doing it, there might be a pretty good reason, but now I will wonder if everyone is just simply uninformed and assuming that someone else must know something that they don't.

The Turtle Who Couldn't Stop Talking
Image Author: Ellsworth Young
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons

Wednesday, October 25, 2017

Reading Notes: Kincaid's Shri Krishna of Dwarka Part B

Title: Shri Krishna of Dwarka and Other Stories
Author: C. A. Kincaid
Year: 1920

- One of the nobles of Dwarka is given a jewel from the Sun God. It brings good fortune to good men, and death to bad men. Krishna did not think a noble was worthy of this jewel. A story could be told about Krishna looking down upon those not as fortunate as him.

- To recover the jewel, Krishna and the Bear King were locked in a "death struggle" for 21 days. A story could be told about this struggle.

- After recovering the jewel, the Bear King offers his daughter as a wife to Krishna. Satrajit also offers his daughter to Krishna once the jewel is returned to him. A story could be told about Krishna's first wife becoming jealous and leaving Krishna.

- The Sun God's jewel seems to bring deceit and jealousy among any who covet it. Balarama even believes that Krishna is lying to him about having the jewel.

- After the jewel returned to Dwarka, Balarama and Satyabhama, Krishna's third wife and daughter of Satrajit, both claim the jewel. Krishna could have wed those two so they could share the jewel.

- Krishna's first son was thrown into the ocean by a demon named Sambara. He was swallowed by a fish, but unharmed. The fish was caught by a fisherman who sold the fish to Sambara in the marketplace. This story could be told in a lot more detail.

- Another dice game leads to misfortune and death. I should write a story about dice games becoming illegal.

- Usha and Aniruddha fell in love, married, and lived together in the women's apartments with Aniruddha in hiding. This story could be told more in depth.

- Krishna sometimes seems quick to anger and just as quick to act from his anger. In disposing of Prince Shishupala, he tried once to avoid a fight, then kills him with a discus without a fight. I would have liked to see Krishna at least give Shishupala a chance to fight back before killing him.

Death of Balarama
Image Author: Ramanarayanadatta astri
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons

Reading Notes: Kincaid's Shri Krishna of Dwarka Part A

Title: Shri Krishna of Dwarka and Other Stories
Author: C. A. Kincaid
Year: 1920


- Krishna's birth was weird to say the least. I could write a story about a prison escape, although I would probably have Vasudeva be the only captive.

- Kansa does appear to have some sense of compassion. He did not kill Devaki's first seven children in the beginning, and he also lets Devaki and Vasudeva be released from their cells once he finds out that Krishna has already escaped. He also allowed Devaki and Vasudeva to be in the same cell (I assume), which is why they were able to continue to having children....he probably should have separated them.

- But he also kills every male child in his kingdom, so maybe he doesn't have that much compassion.

- Krishna being in the town of Gokula brought many tragedies upon the village. Male children were killed by Putana and a Trinavarta, taking the shape of a whirlwind destroyed property and animals. Perhaps the people of Gokula could force Krishna and his family to leave the village since they are bringing such misfortune. - Actually, the villagers do end up realizing the pattern of happenings, but blame it on the town instead of Krishna. 

- Kansa keeps sending demons to kill Krishna and they keep failing. He should try to make peace with Krishna and change his ways if he wants to continue living.

- Pralambha, a demon, took the form of a herdboy and played with Krishna and his friends before trying to kill him. An interesting story would be Krishna and Pralambha becoming lifelong friends.

- The story or Krishna reminds me of Hercules. 

- Krishna and Balarama killed many people in Mathura. It's like the Wild West out there, completely lawless. 

- Rukmani sent a letter to Krishna because she wanted to marry him and not who she was matched with. Krishna "captures her" and destroys the army of her suitor. This story could be told differently. Krishna could not be interested, or Krishna could be the one interested while Rukmani isn't. Or, after her and Krishna are together, they could flee to a different part of the world (Lanka maybe?) to be together without fear of consequence. 

Krishna Eating Butter
Image Author: Shrinet27
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons


Thursday, October 19, 2017

Week 9 Story: The Competition

The crowds filled the stands, eagerly anticipating the day's festivities. Day had just broke in Dhritarashtra's kingdom and it was finally time for Drona's students to showcase the skills they had spent years perfecting. First would be warm-ups; an opportunity for the students to show off and ignite the audience. Next would be the individual skills competition, and finally, the team competition.

The students were introduced and made their way to the center of the arena where they began to stretch and loosen up. Shortly after, they took their places and got started with warm ups. Bhima and Duryodhana sent the spectators into a frenzy with their impressive displays of power, while Yudhistira and the twins showed their quickness, speed, and agility. Arjuna mesmerized everyone with his unmatched range and impeccable accuracy. Neither Drona nor King Dhritarashtra could have been more proud.

As the individual skills competition was about to begin, an unknown young man around the same age as the other students entered the arena. He immediately matched Arjuna's range and pinpoint accuracy. Arjuna was quite annoyed, "Who is this sandal-wearing peasant that intrudes on our competition? Can he not afford the proper footwear?" Duryodhana was elated, however, as he hated the Pandava brothers and anyone that could humiliate them was alright in his book. "You seem scared, Arjuna. He is better than you even in sandals!" Drona intervened, "By rule, sandals cannot be worn during the competition, as they will scuff the floor. Without the proper footwear, this young man cannot partake." The young man dropped his head in shame and began to leave. Duryodhana stopped him and immediately sent a servant to retrieve a brand new pair of high tops for his new friends, Karna. This act of kindness was the beginning of an unbreakable friendship between Duryodhana and Karna and a mutual hatred between Karna and Arjuna.

Karna's New Shoes
Image Author: 2Pacalyp
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons


The individual competitions got off to a fast start with Yudhistira, the twins, and Drona's son, Ashwatthama, participating in the skills challenge, while Duryodhana and Bhima competed in the dunk contest, and Arjuna and Karna facing off in the three point shootout. Yudhistira comfortably won the skills challenge, which tests a player's dribbling, passing, and shooting abilities. Duryodhana narrowly defeated Bhima in the dunk contest, but the judges were less than objective. Arjuna and Karna tied in the three point shootout, with neither missing a shot. This made for a dramatic transition to the final competition, a three versus three pickup game.

What was originally supposed to be two versus two had become three versus three with the arrival of Karna. Duryodhana, Ashwatthama, and Karna would face Yudhistira, Bhima, and Arjuna in a half-court, first-to-eleven (by ones and twos), make-it take-it, win-by-two pickup game officiated loosely by Drona and Krishna. The crowd was in a frenzy.

The game was back and forth throughout. A two pointer by Arjuna would be matched by a two from Karna. Duryodhana and Bhima engaged in a colossal battle in the post, with neither being able to gain the upper hand. Yudhistira was a bit better offensively than Ashwatthama, but his counterpart was the best defensive guard off all Drona's students. With the game tied a nine, the three Pandavas, who held possession, were looking to end the game with a two from Arjuna. Yudhistira held the ball at the top of the key, while Arjuna was to his left on the wing, and Bhima was in the paint. The plan was for Bhima to set a ball screen on Yudhistira's man (Ashwatthama), allowing Yudhistira to drive to the basket. When this happens, Karna will have to leave Arjuna to help with Yudhistira, leaving Arjuna open for a game winning two. Duryodhana knew this play was coming, as the Pandavas had run it multiple times during the game already, so when Bhima set the screen, Duryodhana left Bhima and guarded Yudhistira. After recovering from the screen, Aswatthama helped Duryodhana, effectively trapping Yudhistira, but leaving Bhima completely open. Making an amazing pass, Yudhistira got the ball to Bhima, who was wide open for a game winning two.

Bhima was not known as a three-point shooter. Bhima was a post player who excelled around the rim, and rarely, if ever took a shot outside of the paint. But now he had a chance to win the game. He had to take the shot. With Duryodhana running at him full speed, Bhima went into his shooting motion. The ball left his hand just before Duryodhana's could swat it away. The ball seemed to be in the air forever. Finally, it hit the backboard. Then the front iron, then the back iron, and through the hoop. The crowd was electric and the Pandavas ecstatic. Duryodhana's team, feeling humiliated, vowed to one day embarrass the Pandavas the way they had been embarrassed, leading to a lifelong hatred between the two groups.




Author's note: 
The original story is centered around an event displaying students' skills with their preferred weapons. In my story, the students show off their basketball skills. Instead of Karna being rejected by the Pandavas for not being of noble birth, he is rejected for not being able to afford basketball shoes. 
I used a lot of basketball specific terminology, so if you are not familiar with the game, this guide could be of some help.
Bibliography. The Indian Story Book: The Five Tall Sons of Pandu by Richard Wilson and illustrated by Frank Pape. Web Source.

Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Reading Notes: Wilson's Mahabharata Part B

Title: The Indian Story Book: The Five Tall Sons of Pandu Part B
Author: Richard Wilson
Illustrator: Frank Pape
Year: 1914


- King Dhritarashtra has a much more sane, likable character in this version. I would like to see him try to prevent the war between the Kauravas and Pandavas, though. - He does make an attempt during Krishna's visit, although it is in vain. 

- Draupad makes the point that Duryodhan and Yudhishthir were not the only ones to be affected by the battle, but also the armies they will lead, who are not at odds with each other. This would be another instance where a pick-up basketball game could be used to change the story. In fact, this could be the final game. The first game could have taken place at the tournament held by Drona, the second could replace the dice game (although that would be more of a game of HORSE or Around the World), with Yudhishthir still gambling away everything and leading to banishment, and this final game would be the end.

- I understand Duryodhan's point of view in regards to not giving the Pandavas back their kingdom. No one forced Yudhishthir to continue playing the dice game. It seems as if a notarized, legally-binding contract signed before the dice game was played would prevent any unjust claims.

- I prefer Karna's mother explaining to him that he is the brother of the Pandavas, not Bhisma.

- Arjun and Karna had faced each other many times, but something has always happened to keep them from fighting until the end. Almost divine in a way. With pretty much all of the forces of North India involved in this battle, it would be a good time for an outside force to invade. Perhaps Persia or a kingdom from the south.



Battle Between Kauravas and Pandavas
Image Author: Unknown
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons

Reading Notes: Wilson's Mahabharata Part A

Title: The Indian Story Book: The Five Tall Sons of Pandu Part A
Author: Richard Wilson
Illustrator: Frank Pape
Year: 1914

- What are the sons tall?

- Bhima and Duryodhan battle with maces at the tournament in front of the crowd. It starts friendly, but then gets heated. Reminds me of a pickup basketball game. Arjun would definitely be an elite three point shooter.

- Karna shows up unannounced, matching Arjun's skills. Another three-point specialist. Pick-up game, HORSE, or Around the World?

- Karna is "made fun of" for not being of noble birth. The setting could be a gym or court at or near a private high school that the Pandavas and their cousins attend, while Karna is walking by and sees the game. 

- The Pandavas flee the burning house and live in the forest for a bit before going into Draupad's city where the competition for his daughter was being held. They are trying to blend in and act as hermits, but they are tall. So tall that it's in the title of the story. I feel that it would be hard for them to blend in. Perhaps I could tell a humorous story of their efforts to blend in while being much taller than everyone else.

- Karna was once again held back by not being born into nobility. This time, Princess Draupadi says that as the daughter of a king, she will not marry him. He never resists or replies, he simply looks into the sun and prays. 

- Krishna is votes as the most noble and holiest man...then he kills a king who disagrees...

- Yudhisthir's dice match with Sakuni can be retold as a man at a casino with a sever gambling problem losing everything he owns.

Pick-up Basketball Game
Image Author: Tony Alter
Image Source: Flickr

Thursday, October 12, 2017

Week 8 Progress

Looking Back: Overall, I am satisfied with my progress so far. I have missed one assignment so far, (Week 7 Storytelling) so I'm pretty disappointed in myself with that, but I do believe I can make the points up through extra credit. So far, however, I have only taken advantage of one extra credit opportunity after planning to complete at least one assignment per week. My favorite assignments so far have been the readings, as both epics have been very interesting and easy to get into. My routine, while it has changed slightly from my initial planned schedule, is pretty solidified. I generally do certain assignments on the same day every week, with the only variation being at the weekend. It has worked well for me so far.

Looking Forward: My main focus is to not miss any more assignments, and as long as I continue at my current pace, I do not believe that will be a problem. Aside from that, I would like to incorporate more extra credit in the coming weeks, allowing me a little breathing room if something unexpected were to come up.


Motivation
Image Source: Flickr

Wednesday, October 11, 2017

Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Feedback in: The feedback I have received for my project has been reasonable. The randomizer has been kind to me as I have received quite a few comments about my project. To this point, most of the feedback has been positive, which I appreciate, but I do feel that critical feedback would be more beneficial for me. Along with that, the more specific a suggestion or "complaint" (for lack of a better word) is, the more it helps. I believe that I will probably receive a few more suggestions with my first story being posted as well, so that should also help.

Feedback out: Overall, I believe that the feedback I have left has been at least a little bit helpful. I try to leave positive feedback for things that stand out to me as being done very well so it can continue to be built upon, and I also try to leave suggestions to help improve in an area that may not be quite as strong. The former is much easier to do than the latter, but both are necessary to helping someone raise the quality of their work. Leaving feedback for others has definitely helped me with my own work. It's a great way of learning from other people's successes and mistakes.

Blog comments: I have enjoyed reading other students' introductory posts. Between that and reading a few of their stories, I am able to get a slight sense for some of the personalities in this class, even without meeting in person. Looking back on my own introduction after having read so many others, I feel as though I may have been a little bit vague in my own. However, commenting on other introductions has allowed me to add a little bit more about myself when connecting with others, which has been nice.

Looking Forward: To make my given feedback more useful for others, I need to read the feedback others has given first. While I do this sometimes, I don't always. Doing this will not only keep me from repeating what someone else has already said, but it will allow me to build off of what has already been said. It will also present me with a different perspective to the same work and potentially trigger a different way of thinking about the work.

Image:
Feedback is your cue to rethink and revise.
Image Author: Laura Gibbs
Image Source: Growth Mindset Memes


I chose this image because I completely agree with the text. Without feedback, there would never be revision. People would rarely rethink or revise their work, and they definitely wouldn't know how it looks to their audience. Without rethinking or revising, things tend to stay the same, not improve.


Tuesday, October 10, 2017

Week 8 Reading and Writing

Looking Back:
So far over the semester, I have thoroughly enjoyed this class. I really enjoyed reading the Ramayana and warmed up to the Mahabharata about halfway through, although I certainly prefer Rama's story. Taking notes while reading has helped my writing tremendously. I do tend to focus more on the story than the themes when reading and taking notes, so my stories aren't usually as creative as some of the other students in this class, but I've found that it works well for me. 

My project is going...alright. I really like the topic and the opening I have chosen, but I'm still not positive on my implementation. I think I will figure a lot more out this week during the revision phase of the project.  

My greatest accomplishment in writing has been the evolution of my writing. I have slowly incorporated dialogue into my stories, which I felt very uncomfortable with at first. Reading the stories of other students and writing my own stories has really helped me settle into a style. 

Image:

Rama loosens the bow for Lakshmana
Image Author: Balasaheb Pandit Pant Pratinidhi
Image Source: Tamil and Vedas

I believe this is my favorite image posted so far. I like it because I feel that the story it is attached to is one of the better stories I have told and the image fits perfectly with the story. 

Looking Forward: Looking forward, I would like to continue seeing my writing style evolve. Many of my stories have used the same tense, and all have used a first person point of view, so that's an area I could experiment with. As someone who was a bit anxious about a class based on story writing, I feel that I have already grown leaps and bounds in my writing ability. Being able to write in a different tense, from multiple points of view, and with or without dialogue would leave me with even more confidence than I have already gained this semester. 

Thursday, October 5, 2017

Reading Notes: Narayan's Mahabharata Part D

Title: The Mahabharata: A Shortened Modern Prose Version of the Indian Epic Part D
Author: R. K. Narayan
Year: 1978


- Yudhistira makes every attempt to avoid war. All of the Pandavas agree, except Sahadeva, who can't forget what happened to Draupadi. Draupadi insists in war, even if it is here sons that have to fight. This could probably all be avoided if Duryodhana would just apologize.

- Gandhari chastises Duryodhana for his actions, but he just ignores her and the king and walks out. If he were to be detained and exiled, the kingdom would not be destroyed.

- Krishna and Kunthi try to persuade Kama to leave Duryodhana's side, but his loyalty will not allow it. He does vow to only fight Arjuna. A story could be told about that battle, the reason for the battle, or the opposite of what happens can be told. 

- Arjuna sees his family on the battlefield and does not want to fight. Krishna takes the form of a god and grants Arjuna a vision, helping him understand why he has to fight. A story could be told about the vision, Arjuna could still choose not to fight, leading to either consequences from Krishna, or preventing the war all together. Krishna could also expose his god form to Duryodhana, getting him to change his mind, or ignore him like he has everyone else. 

- The battle went back and forth for 18 days, with both sides gaining and losing an advantage. I think the Pandavas could easily defeat Duryodhana instead of fighting for so long, causing many innocent deaths. After Duryodhana is slain, the rest of the Kauravas could come to their sense, give the Pandavas what they are owed, and stop the fighting.

- Nakula is hardly mentioned in the battle, if at all. A story could be written where he plays a larger role. 

Duryodhana and Bhima
Image Author: Ramanarayanadatta astri
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons