Thursday, October 26, 2017

Reading Notes: Jataka Tales Part A

Title: Jataka Tales Part A
Author: Ellen C. Babbitt
Illustrator: Ellsworth Young
Year: 1912

- The crocodile talks too much. If he hadn't told the monkey that he was going to kill him for his heart, he wouldn't have gotten duped.

- The way the story is told, it seems that the crocodile is always watching the monkey, while the monkey is never told to be watching the crocodile; however, the monkey clearly has much better knowledge of the crocodile than the crocodile does of the monkey. 

- A talking turtle would probably scare me too. I don't know that I would try to kill it, though.

- The little girl's greed (along with the kindness of the second merchant) actually led to her family getting many things instead of just one or nothing, while the first merchant's greed kept him from having something worth a lot of money for very little. If he was going to give up something for it anyway, he should have just done so in the first place, but then there wouldn't be much of a story.

- The flying turtle's bad attitude led to his death. Perhaps the geese could have given him more of a warning that he would die if he talked during their trip instead of just telling him not to. It would also be interesting to think about the turtle's thoughts as he fell from the sky.

- I think the story of the ox would be kind of funny (and a bit sad) if the ox went back to pull the carts the second time after having the talk with his owner just to find out that he wasn't actually strong enough to pull 100 carts. Maybe the owner could have sold him for all the money he lost.

- Never give up water, especially when you do not have another source. The men weren't even carrying it, it was being pulled by the oxen. No reason to throw it away.

- The fowler's wife was made that he wasn't bringing home any quail. If she would have worked with him the way the quails were working together, they would have caught more. 

- The king could have chosen anyone to be his valuer, but he chose an uneducated peasant. He really just needed to choose someone who thought in a similar manner as him, not someone of less intelligence. 

- The timid rabbit reminds me of the saying "If everyone else jumped off a bridge, would you?" Under many circumstances I would assume that if everyone is doing it, there might be a pretty good reason, but now I will wonder if everyone is just simply uninformed and assuming that someone else must know something that they don't.

The Turtle Who Couldn't Stop Talking
Image Author: Ellsworth Young
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons

Wednesday, October 25, 2017

Reading Notes: Kincaid's Shri Krishna of Dwarka Part B

Title: Shri Krishna of Dwarka and Other Stories
Author: C. A. Kincaid
Year: 1920

- One of the nobles of Dwarka is given a jewel from the Sun God. It brings good fortune to good men, and death to bad men. Krishna did not think a noble was worthy of this jewel. A story could be told about Krishna looking down upon those not as fortunate as him.

- To recover the jewel, Krishna and the Bear King were locked in a "death struggle" for 21 days. A story could be told about this struggle.

- After recovering the jewel, the Bear King offers his daughter as a wife to Krishna. Satrajit also offers his daughter to Krishna once the jewel is returned to him. A story could be told about Krishna's first wife becoming jealous and leaving Krishna.

- The Sun God's jewel seems to bring deceit and jealousy among any who covet it. Balarama even believes that Krishna is lying to him about having the jewel.

- After the jewel returned to Dwarka, Balarama and Satyabhama, Krishna's third wife and daughter of Satrajit, both claim the jewel. Krishna could have wed those two so they could share the jewel.

- Krishna's first son was thrown into the ocean by a demon named Sambara. He was swallowed by a fish, but unharmed. The fish was caught by a fisherman who sold the fish to Sambara in the marketplace. This story could be told in a lot more detail.

- Another dice game leads to misfortune and death. I should write a story about dice games becoming illegal.

- Usha and Aniruddha fell in love, married, and lived together in the women's apartments with Aniruddha in hiding. This story could be told more in depth.

- Krishna sometimes seems quick to anger and just as quick to act from his anger. In disposing of Prince Shishupala, he tried once to avoid a fight, then kills him with a discus without a fight. I would have liked to see Krishna at least give Shishupala a chance to fight back before killing him.

Death of Balarama
Image Author: Ramanarayanadatta astri
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons

Reading Notes: Kincaid's Shri Krishna of Dwarka Part A

Title: Shri Krishna of Dwarka and Other Stories
Author: C. A. Kincaid
Year: 1920


- Krishna's birth was weird to say the least. I could write a story about a prison escape, although I would probably have Vasudeva be the only captive.

- Kansa does appear to have some sense of compassion. He did not kill Devaki's first seven children in the beginning, and he also lets Devaki and Vasudeva be released from their cells once he finds out that Krishna has already escaped. He also allowed Devaki and Vasudeva to be in the same cell (I assume), which is why they were able to continue to having children....he probably should have separated them.

- But he also kills every male child in his kingdom, so maybe he doesn't have that much compassion.

- Krishna being in the town of Gokula brought many tragedies upon the village. Male children were killed by Putana and a Trinavarta, taking the shape of a whirlwind destroyed property and animals. Perhaps the people of Gokula could force Krishna and his family to leave the village since they are bringing such misfortune. - Actually, the villagers do end up realizing the pattern of happenings, but blame it on the town instead of Krishna. 

- Kansa keeps sending demons to kill Krishna and they keep failing. He should try to make peace with Krishna and change his ways if he wants to continue living.

- Pralambha, a demon, took the form of a herdboy and played with Krishna and his friends before trying to kill him. An interesting story would be Krishna and Pralambha becoming lifelong friends.

- The story or Krishna reminds me of Hercules. 

- Krishna and Balarama killed many people in Mathura. It's like the Wild West out there, completely lawless. 

- Rukmani sent a letter to Krishna because she wanted to marry him and not who she was matched with. Krishna "captures her" and destroys the army of her suitor. This story could be told differently. Krishna could not be interested, or Krishna could be the one interested while Rukmani isn't. Or, after her and Krishna are together, they could flee to a different part of the world (Lanka maybe?) to be together without fear of consequence. 

Krishna Eating Butter
Image Author: Shrinet27
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons


Thursday, October 19, 2017

Week 9 Story: The Competition

The crowds filled the stands, eagerly anticipating the day's festivities. Day had just broke in Dhritarashtra's kingdom and it was finally time for Drona's students to showcase the skills they had spent years perfecting. First would be warm-ups; an opportunity for the students to show off and ignite the audience. Next would be the individual skills competition, and finally, the team competition.

The students were introduced and made their way to the center of the arena where they began to stretch and loosen up. Shortly after, they took their places and got started with warm ups. Bhima and Duryodhana sent the spectators into a frenzy with their impressive displays of power, while Yudhistira and the twins showed their quickness, speed, and agility. Arjuna mesmerized everyone with his unmatched range and impeccable accuracy. Neither Drona nor King Dhritarashtra could have been more proud.

As the individual skills competition was about to begin, an unknown young man around the same age as the other students entered the arena. He immediately matched Arjuna's range and pinpoint accuracy. Arjuna was quite annoyed, "Who is this sandal-wearing peasant that intrudes on our competition? Can he not afford the proper footwear?" Duryodhana was elated, however, as he hated the Pandava brothers and anyone that could humiliate them was alright in his book. "You seem scared, Arjuna. He is better than you even in sandals!" Drona intervened, "By rule, sandals cannot be worn during the competition, as they will scuff the floor. Without the proper footwear, this young man cannot partake." The young man dropped his head in shame and began to leave. Duryodhana stopped him and immediately sent a servant to retrieve a brand new pair of high tops for his new friends, Karna. This act of kindness was the beginning of an unbreakable friendship between Duryodhana and Karna and a mutual hatred between Karna and Arjuna.

Karna's New Shoes
Image Author: 2Pacalyp
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons


The individual competitions got off to a fast start with Yudhistira, the twins, and Drona's son, Ashwatthama, participating in the skills challenge, while Duryodhana and Bhima competed in the dunk contest, and Arjuna and Karna facing off in the three point shootout. Yudhistira comfortably won the skills challenge, which tests a player's dribbling, passing, and shooting abilities. Duryodhana narrowly defeated Bhima in the dunk contest, but the judges were less than objective. Arjuna and Karna tied in the three point shootout, with neither missing a shot. This made for a dramatic transition to the final competition, a three versus three pickup game.

What was originally supposed to be two versus two had become three versus three with the arrival of Karna. Duryodhana, Ashwatthama, and Karna would face Yudhistira, Bhima, and Arjuna in a half-court, first-to-eleven (by ones and twos), make-it take-it, win-by-two pickup game officiated loosely by Drona and Krishna. The crowd was in a frenzy.

The game was back and forth throughout. A two pointer by Arjuna would be matched by a two from Karna. Duryodhana and Bhima engaged in a colossal battle in the post, with neither being able to gain the upper hand. Yudhistira was a bit better offensively than Ashwatthama, but his counterpart was the best defensive guard off all Drona's students. With the game tied a nine, the three Pandavas, who held possession, were looking to end the game with a two from Arjuna. Yudhistira held the ball at the top of the key, while Arjuna was to his left on the wing, and Bhima was in the paint. The plan was for Bhima to set a ball screen on Yudhistira's man (Ashwatthama), allowing Yudhistira to drive to the basket. When this happens, Karna will have to leave Arjuna to help with Yudhistira, leaving Arjuna open for a game winning two. Duryodhana knew this play was coming, as the Pandavas had run it multiple times during the game already, so when Bhima set the screen, Duryodhana left Bhima and guarded Yudhistira. After recovering from the screen, Aswatthama helped Duryodhana, effectively trapping Yudhistira, but leaving Bhima completely open. Making an amazing pass, Yudhistira got the ball to Bhima, who was wide open for a game winning two.

Bhima was not known as a three-point shooter. Bhima was a post player who excelled around the rim, and rarely, if ever took a shot outside of the paint. But now he had a chance to win the game. He had to take the shot. With Duryodhana running at him full speed, Bhima went into his shooting motion. The ball left his hand just before Duryodhana's could swat it away. The ball seemed to be in the air forever. Finally, it hit the backboard. Then the front iron, then the back iron, and through the hoop. The crowd was electric and the Pandavas ecstatic. Duryodhana's team, feeling humiliated, vowed to one day embarrass the Pandavas the way they had been embarrassed, leading to a lifelong hatred between the two groups.




Author's note: 
The original story is centered around an event displaying students' skills with their preferred weapons. In my story, the students show off their basketball skills. Instead of Karna being rejected by the Pandavas for not being of noble birth, he is rejected for not being able to afford basketball shoes. 
I used a lot of basketball specific terminology, so if you are not familiar with the game, this guide could be of some help.
Bibliography. The Indian Story Book: The Five Tall Sons of Pandu by Richard Wilson and illustrated by Frank Pape. Web Source.

Wednesday, October 18, 2017

Reading Notes: Wilson's Mahabharata Part B

Title: The Indian Story Book: The Five Tall Sons of Pandu Part B
Author: Richard Wilson
Illustrator: Frank Pape
Year: 1914


- King Dhritarashtra has a much more sane, likable character in this version. I would like to see him try to prevent the war between the Kauravas and Pandavas, though. - He does make an attempt during Krishna's visit, although it is in vain. 

- Draupad makes the point that Duryodhan and Yudhishthir were not the only ones to be affected by the battle, but also the armies they will lead, who are not at odds with each other. This would be another instance where a pick-up basketball game could be used to change the story. In fact, this could be the final game. The first game could have taken place at the tournament held by Drona, the second could replace the dice game (although that would be more of a game of HORSE or Around the World), with Yudhishthir still gambling away everything and leading to banishment, and this final game would be the end.

- I understand Duryodhan's point of view in regards to not giving the Pandavas back their kingdom. No one forced Yudhishthir to continue playing the dice game. It seems as if a notarized, legally-binding contract signed before the dice game was played would prevent any unjust claims.

- I prefer Karna's mother explaining to him that he is the brother of the Pandavas, not Bhisma.

- Arjun and Karna had faced each other many times, but something has always happened to keep them from fighting until the end. Almost divine in a way. With pretty much all of the forces of North India involved in this battle, it would be a good time for an outside force to invade. Perhaps Persia or a kingdom from the south.



Battle Between Kauravas and Pandavas
Image Author: Unknown
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons

Reading Notes: Wilson's Mahabharata Part A

Title: The Indian Story Book: The Five Tall Sons of Pandu Part A
Author: Richard Wilson
Illustrator: Frank Pape
Year: 1914

- What are the sons tall?

- Bhima and Duryodhan battle with maces at the tournament in front of the crowd. It starts friendly, but then gets heated. Reminds me of a pickup basketball game. Arjun would definitely be an elite three point shooter.

- Karna shows up unannounced, matching Arjun's skills. Another three-point specialist. Pick-up game, HORSE, or Around the World?

- Karna is "made fun of" for not being of noble birth. The setting could be a gym or court at or near a private high school that the Pandavas and their cousins attend, while Karna is walking by and sees the game. 

- The Pandavas flee the burning house and live in the forest for a bit before going into Draupad's city where the competition for his daughter was being held. They are trying to blend in and act as hermits, but they are tall. So tall that it's in the title of the story. I feel that it would be hard for them to blend in. Perhaps I could tell a humorous story of their efforts to blend in while being much taller than everyone else.

- Karna was once again held back by not being born into nobility. This time, Princess Draupadi says that as the daughter of a king, she will not marry him. He never resists or replies, he simply looks into the sun and prays. 

- Krishna is votes as the most noble and holiest man...then he kills a king who disagrees...

- Yudhisthir's dice match with Sakuni can be retold as a man at a casino with a sever gambling problem losing everything he owns.

Pick-up Basketball Game
Image Author: Tony Alter
Image Source: Flickr

Thursday, October 12, 2017

Week 8 Progress

Looking Back: Overall, I am satisfied with my progress so far. I have missed one assignment so far, (Week 7 Storytelling) so I'm pretty disappointed in myself with that, but I do believe I can make the points up through extra credit. So far, however, I have only taken advantage of one extra credit opportunity after planning to complete at least one assignment per week. My favorite assignments so far have been the readings, as both epics have been very interesting and easy to get into. My routine, while it has changed slightly from my initial planned schedule, is pretty solidified. I generally do certain assignments on the same day every week, with the only variation being at the weekend. It has worked well for me so far.

Looking Forward: My main focus is to not miss any more assignments, and as long as I continue at my current pace, I do not believe that will be a problem. Aside from that, I would like to incorporate more extra credit in the coming weeks, allowing me a little breathing room if something unexpected were to come up.


Motivation
Image Source: Flickr

Wednesday, October 11, 2017

Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Feedback in: The feedback I have received for my project has been reasonable. The randomizer has been kind to me as I have received quite a few comments about my project. To this point, most of the feedback has been positive, which I appreciate, but I do feel that critical feedback would be more beneficial for me. Along with that, the more specific a suggestion or "complaint" (for lack of a better word) is, the more it helps. I believe that I will probably receive a few more suggestions with my first story being posted as well, so that should also help.

Feedback out: Overall, I believe that the feedback I have left has been at least a little bit helpful. I try to leave positive feedback for things that stand out to me as being done very well so it can continue to be built upon, and I also try to leave suggestions to help improve in an area that may not be quite as strong. The former is much easier to do than the latter, but both are necessary to helping someone raise the quality of their work. Leaving feedback for others has definitely helped me with my own work. It's a great way of learning from other people's successes and mistakes.

Blog comments: I have enjoyed reading other students' introductory posts. Between that and reading a few of their stories, I am able to get a slight sense for some of the personalities in this class, even without meeting in person. Looking back on my own introduction after having read so many others, I feel as though I may have been a little bit vague in my own. However, commenting on other introductions has allowed me to add a little bit more about myself when connecting with others, which has been nice.

Looking Forward: To make my given feedback more useful for others, I need to read the feedback others has given first. While I do this sometimes, I don't always. Doing this will not only keep me from repeating what someone else has already said, but it will allow me to build off of what has already been said. It will also present me with a different perspective to the same work and potentially trigger a different way of thinking about the work.

Image:
Feedback is your cue to rethink and revise.
Image Author: Laura Gibbs
Image Source: Growth Mindset Memes


I chose this image because I completely agree with the text. Without feedback, there would never be revision. People would rarely rethink or revise their work, and they definitely wouldn't know how it looks to their audience. Without rethinking or revising, things tend to stay the same, not improve.


Tuesday, October 10, 2017

Week 8 Reading and Writing

Looking Back:
So far over the semester, I have thoroughly enjoyed this class. I really enjoyed reading the Ramayana and warmed up to the Mahabharata about halfway through, although I certainly prefer Rama's story. Taking notes while reading has helped my writing tremendously. I do tend to focus more on the story than the themes when reading and taking notes, so my stories aren't usually as creative as some of the other students in this class, but I've found that it works well for me. 

My project is going...alright. I really like the topic and the opening I have chosen, but I'm still not positive on my implementation. I think I will figure a lot more out this week during the revision phase of the project.  

My greatest accomplishment in writing has been the evolution of my writing. I have slowly incorporated dialogue into my stories, which I felt very uncomfortable with at first. Reading the stories of other students and writing my own stories has really helped me settle into a style. 

Image:

Rama loosens the bow for Lakshmana
Image Author: Balasaheb Pandit Pant Pratinidhi
Image Source: Tamil and Vedas

I believe this is my favorite image posted so far. I like it because I feel that the story it is attached to is one of the better stories I have told and the image fits perfectly with the story. 

Looking Forward: Looking forward, I would like to continue seeing my writing style evolve. Many of my stories have used the same tense, and all have used a first person point of view, so that's an area I could experiment with. As someone who was a bit anxious about a class based on story writing, I feel that I have already grown leaps and bounds in my writing ability. Being able to write in a different tense, from multiple points of view, and with or without dialogue would leave me with even more confidence than I have already gained this semester. 

Thursday, October 5, 2017

Reading Notes: Narayan's Mahabharata Part D

Title: The Mahabharata: A Shortened Modern Prose Version of the Indian Epic Part D
Author: R. K. Narayan
Year: 1978


- Yudhistira makes every attempt to avoid war. All of the Pandavas agree, except Sahadeva, who can't forget what happened to Draupadi. Draupadi insists in war, even if it is here sons that have to fight. This could probably all be avoided if Duryodhana would just apologize.

- Gandhari chastises Duryodhana for his actions, but he just ignores her and the king and walks out. If he were to be detained and exiled, the kingdom would not be destroyed.

- Krishna and Kunthi try to persuade Kama to leave Duryodhana's side, but his loyalty will not allow it. He does vow to only fight Arjuna. A story could be told about that battle, the reason for the battle, or the opposite of what happens can be told. 

- Arjuna sees his family on the battlefield and does not want to fight. Krishna takes the form of a god and grants Arjuna a vision, helping him understand why he has to fight. A story could be told about the vision, Arjuna could still choose not to fight, leading to either consequences from Krishna, or preventing the war all together. Krishna could also expose his god form to Duryodhana, getting him to change his mind, or ignore him like he has everyone else. 

- The battle went back and forth for 18 days, with both sides gaining and losing an advantage. I think the Pandavas could easily defeat Duryodhana instead of fighting for so long, causing many innocent deaths. After Duryodhana is slain, the rest of the Kauravas could come to their sense, give the Pandavas what they are owed, and stop the fighting.

- Nakula is hardly mentioned in the battle, if at all. A story could be written where he plays a larger role. 

Duryodhana and Bhima
Image Author: Ramanarayanadatta astri
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons


Wednesday, October 4, 2017

Reading Notes: Narayan's Mahabharata Part C

Title: The Mahabharata: A Shortened Modern Prose Version of the Indian Epic Part C
Author: R. K. Narayan
Year: 1978

- The rift between Dhritarashtra's sons and nephews has made him absolutely worthless. I hate his character. 

- Sakuni suggests that Duryodhana go to Kamyaka where the Pandavas are to show off his power and wealth. "It is said that there could be nothing more gratifying than showing off one's superiority before an enemy reduced to beggar." 
I could write a story where Duryodhana does this, but sees the Pandavas enjoying their lives and each other's company. Duryodhana would become sad at realizing that while he has everything in the world, he is very empty and really has nothing due to the way he has acted.

- Duryodhana does go to Kamyaka and set up a post near the forest, but many of his soldiers are killed by gandharvas and Duryodhana was taken prisoner. The gandharvas were sent by Indra to teach Duryodhana a lesson, but the Pandavas killed the gandhavas and rescued Duryodhana anyway, who thanks them and returns home.
A story could be written about Indra becoming upset with the Pandavas,  and the Pandavas and Duryodhana becoming allies to defeat Indra. 

- Draupadi is assaulted by Kichaka and is subsequently killed by Bhima, along with much of his army. Yudhistira and the King ignored her when she spoke to them about Kichaka assaulting her, which made her very upset. Yudhistira has a very big problem with the dice game, and it will probably lead to his end. 

- Duryodhana holds a council with his brothers and others. Most advise him to make peace with the Pandavas and welcome them with open arms when their exile ends. Susurman suggests that they should invade Virata. Duryodhana, convinced that the Pandavas are in Virata, agrees with Susurman and begins planning. 

- Dhritarashtra holds a council with his sons and advisers to decide if they should go to war with the Pandavas. The Pandavas want peace, but are requesting their half of the kingdom be given back. No one in the council wants war except for Duryodhana, Karna, and Dussasana. A decision has not yet been made, but I can make a decision for them.


Fight Between Arjuna and Bhisma
Image Author: Ramanarayanadatta astri
Image Source: Wikimedia Commons