Thursday, September 14, 2017

Week 4 Story: Vibhishana's Advice

Following the meeting with his brothers and army commanders, Ravana was left with a lot to think about. Gather the forces and attack now or sit back and destroy them when they get near? They are only mere humans and Ravana is, well, Ravana. Maybe he should just forget about them entirely so he can focus all of his efforts on Sita.

As Ravana contemplated this, another thought slowly crept into his mind. Although he completely dismissed what his brother, Vibhishana, had said, he couldn't forget it. And it began to eat at him constantly. Why would his own brother say that? Is he scared of Rama? Does he think Rama is more powerful than Ravana? He did see Ravana shake Mount Kailas and bring the gods to their knees after all. He certainly knows Ravana's power. What else could it be?

Ravana thought back to what his uncle, Mareecha, had said. He too, advised Ravana to stay away from Rama and to change his wicked ways. For a second, Ravana actually missed his uncle and felt remorse for sending him to his end. He quickly shook that thought once he remembered why. But even the thought of Sita couldn't take his mind away from the meeting. Even his commander-in-chief had questioned Ravana's decision to capture Rama's wife while Rama was away, although his solution was to find and finish Rama and his army.

The day turned to night and Ravana had a decision to make. If he was going to attack Rama, preparation would have to start immediately. Even if they were just going to wait until Rama made his way to Lanka, a plan would still need to be made as soon as possible. He decided to sleep on it and would let his advisers know the course of action the following morning.

Ravana was restless as he tried to sleep. He had a lot on his mind and he was very unsure of what to do, a new experience for him. Before falling asleep, he sent many prayers to Shiva for guidance. He finally fell asleep and began to dream a terrible dream. His city was crumbling and he had no answer for Rama or his army. Rama eventually ended his life. After his death, he came before Vishnu. Vishnu then begins reading a list of all the atrocities Ravana had committed over his time. This dream troubled Ravana greatly.

Ravana's Nightmare
Image Author: Sahib Din
Image Source: British Library


The next morning, Ravana called another meeting with his advisers and brothers. He ordered the immediate release of Sita and called for a messenger to request a meeting with Rama. His brothers and advisers were baffled, but none dare question his orders. His youngest brother, Vibhishana, was smiling on the inside.

Author's Note
In the original story, Ravana holds a council with his brothers and advisers, asking how a monkey was able to burn the city down. The conversation turns to whether they should attack Rama's army, wait for them to approach, or not worry about them at all. Ravana's youngest brother, Vibhishana suggests that there are many signs pointing to Ravana's impending doom and he should release Sita and change his ways. Ravana laughs him off and eventually banishes Vibhishana, who eventually joins Rama's side.
In my story, Ravana actually heeds Vibhishana's advice after having a nightmare where there is another bad sign, Vishnu being his judge.

Bibliography. The Ramayana: A Shortened Modern Prose Version of the Indian Epic by Kamban / R. K. Narayan. Web Source: p. 135. Ravana's Council.

4 comments:

  1. Jeremy,

    I really enjoyed how similar the flow of your retelling of this story was to the original story. It made it easier to spot and enjoy the differences you made in the plot of the story! I really felt as if this story fit right in with the original, which is something hard to duplicate so kudos to you! Looking forward to seeing more of your work!

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  2. Great story! I can like how it is similar to the original that we read but with your own twist. Also, after reading your introductions, I can definitely see your military background in some of your word choice in the story. Thanks for sharing!

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  3. Hi Jeremy!
    I loved the change you made to this story! Rama didn't really seem to make the best choices towards the end of the Ramayana (at least in my opinion), so it was nice to see him heeding advice, even if it was the advice of his own subconscious through dreams. It seemed like a more natural transition from one plot point to the next. Great job!

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  4. Hi Jeremy,

    Wow, what an amazing story. I could read it over and over again. I really did enjoy it. You did a really great job of taking the original and making it into your own. I thought you did a great job with the plot. Speaking as a reader, the reader never loses interest because this is so awesome. Great job, I look forward to reading more in the future.

    Brooks

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