At the start of Spring, merchants resumed their practice of traveling from village to village, selling and bartering in order to find the best deal for both parties. This was how most merchants worked, anyway. There were always a few who sought to maximize their profits by taking advantage of those who did not know the true value of their possessions.
One of these deceitful merchants made their way down the old lady's street. The little girl saw him coming up the road and noticed that he had quite a few goods with him. After the harsh winter they had just experienced, the little girl hoped to trade the bowl for a blanket or two in preparation for the next winter. Her grandmother was getting quite old, after all.
When the merchant got near, the old woman and the little girl approached him with the bowl. They handed it to him, and asked if it was worth two of his blankets. After examining the bowl for an extended period of time, the merchant realized that it was made entirely of gold and was worth more than all of his possessions combined. He scoffed at the two as his greed set in, "Two blankets! For this old thing?! I wouldn't even give you a washcloth." With that, he tossed to bowl aside and continued on to the next street. His plan was to come back later and trade one blanket for the bowl, knowing that the family had no idea how much it was worth.
As the greedy merchant left, another merchant, this one very kind and helpful made his way down the little girl's road. The girl's grandmother had resumed cleaning, but the little girl sat outside crying. When the merchant saw her, he approached her and asked what was wrong. The girl explained that she had asked the other merchant for two blankets in exchange for the bowl, but he told her that it was worthless. They had nothing else in the house to trade and she was worried about how her grandmother would fare during the next winter without blankets.
The kind merchant told the little girl to give him the bowl. Without looking at it, he gave her two of his best blankets. The girl smiled, hugged the merchant, and went to show her grandmother what she received. While the little girl was inside, he took a look at the bowl as it seemed awfully heavy. Once he realized that it was made of gold, he knew he had a decision to make. He could take it to the nearest bank, cash it in, and retire, or he could tell the family the true value of their bowl. It took him less than a second to make his decision. Within minutes, the merchant was taking the family to the bank.
The second merchant, who had spent the entire day thinking about what he was going to do with all the money he was about to make, finally made his way back to old lady's house. He knocked on the door, prepared to offer them one old and torn blanket for their bowl, but no one was home. He cried himself to sleep that night, realizing that his extreme greed had cost him a once in a lifetime opportunity.
Golden Bowl
Image Author: 颐园新居
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Authors Note: In the original story, the first merchant says the bowl isn't worth 7 pennies, throws it on the ground, and leaves. The second merchant, also realizing it's value, gives the family everything he owns, plus all the money he has, equaling $1,000. He then catches a boat and is able to trade the bowl for $100,000, while the first merchant chases him. In my story, the second merchant takes the family to get the full value of the bowl instead of leaving them with 1% of it's value and the first merchant is clueless as to what happened.
Bibliography. Grandmother's Golden Dish by Marie L. Shedlock in Eastern Stories and Legends. Web Source.
Bibliography. Grandmother's Golden Dish by Marie L. Shedlock in Eastern Stories and Legends. Web Source.
Jeremy,
ReplyDeleteI also read this story and thought it was a great little story that proved a purpose in society. I liked your interpretation of it and enjoyed reading your remake of the original. I thought that a lot of these stories were great and all had their own purpose and meaning behind them. Great story and can't wait to read more.
Hey Jeremy.
ReplyDeleteI loved your story. I like how in the end instead of giving them only 1% of the profit the merchant was kind enough to tell them how much the bowl was actually wroth. And I also like how he took them to the bank to get the full value of the bowl. It was a really good story. Keep up the good work.
Hi Jeremy!
ReplyDeleteI loved your take on this story! I liked how you made the second merchant in this story even kinder than the one in the original. This story sends a good message about greed. I was glad to see the little girl would be able to care for her grandmother comfortably for the cold winter. I can’t say I was disappointed to see the greedy merchant regret his decisions!
Hi Jeremy! I really enjoyed reading the original story and yours was just as fun to read. I agree with Logan about the message your story has about greed. I'm glad you made it to where the little girl was able to take care of her grandmother as well. The second merchant definitely deserved to cry over what he did, if not more!
ReplyDeleteHi Jeremy,
ReplyDeleteGreat story here. I thought you did a great job of twisting the original into something even better. You developed the plot really well around the characters you chose. It was an easy read that flowed really smoothly. You did a great job of depicting your story, I could see it right in my mind! Great story here. I am looking forward to coming back to your page and reading more later on in the semester.
Brooks
Hello Jeremy!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job retelling this story because you told the story how you wanted it to be told. That is one of the great things about this class is, how we get to retell the stories how we want. If I would have re-told the story I would have done it the same way. I like how they ended up getting the actual value of the bowl instead of $1,000.00
Hi Jeremy,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your version of this story. I read the original a view weeks ago and liked it enough that I used it for one of my stories so I really liked reading someone else's interpretation as well. I especially liked that you told part of the story from the perspective of the little girl and her grandmother rather than just the merchants. Great job!
-Elizabeth